Main Task-My second draft for the music magazine

For my second draft, I have changed the picture and made the headline and cover lines more out standing by high lighting and underlining them, also I have enlarge my bar code and puff“Only £1.50”, I have also added the strapline “The UK’s Biggest Pop Music Magazine”. Underneath the Masthead, I have also added the issue date and I have tried to keep the front cover as clear as possible.

Main Task-My focus group's comments

My focus group's comments on my first draft for the music magazine:-
-too plain
-not professional enough
-the words are not shown clearly
-the masthead is good
-the main picture is good, but doesn't go with the background colour
-price&issue- not in place
-barcode is not shown clear enough
-the colour is a bit too dark
-not enough information on the front cover
-doesn't have enough attractive storyline

Main Task-First Draft of my Front Cover

Planning for Front Cover Page