My focus group's comments on my first draft for the music magazine:-
-too plain
-not professional enough
-the words are not shown clearly
-the masthead is good
-the main picture is good, but doesn't go with the background colour
-price&issue- not in place
-barcode is not shown clear enough
-the colour is a bit too dark
-not enough information on the front cover
-doesn't have enough attractive storyline
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