Main Task- Second draft of my music magazine's middle spread

This is my second draft of the middle spread; there are still a few lines around the text boxes where I was trying to show how I have improved from the first one to the second one, where I have completely changed the whole theme and background colouring and the way I have lay-out, I feel this is a much better double spread for my magazine.



Focus group comments:-
• Not as boring as the first one
• Look much more professional
• Like the “Big bold HEBE”
• Like the way the pictures are set
• Some grammar mistakes